Dunno what I did,
I'm sorry if I hurt you,
Or if I made you mad...
Oh God, I wish I knew.
You've been amazing
Such a great friend,
I'm not sure what to do,
But I hope it's not the end.
Been worried all day,
Thinking about you,
I hope you are safe,
What should I do?
Why do I worry so much,
And think everything is my fault?
Should I just tuck it away,
Lock my feelings in my vault?
You once told me
That I blame myself too much,
But I really can't help it,
The worrying and such.
I feel sick to my stomach,
Stressed to the bone,
Anxiety sky high,
Feeling so alone...
Why did I even tell you,
What I was writing about?
It always makes my friends leave,
That's why you did, I have no doubt.
That's why no one knows,
About my passion to write,
I'll just keep it to myself,
My secret of the night.
-Princess
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Author:
PrincessPie89 (
Offline) - Published: August 26th, 2016 20:27
- Comment from author about the poem: Worried about a friend... did I do something wrong? Did a mutual friend tell him not to talk to me? Is he in danger? I'm not sure. And it makes me worried about him, and our friendship. I told him I wrote a poem about him... and he quit responding. Which is always what happens when any friends read my poetry... they quit talking to me. So... no more will I tell anyone around me what I'm writing about, or let them read it until I can get my poem book published. And I will only post them here. Where my friends on here will give me honest feedback. No matter good or bad!
- Category: Reflection
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Comments2
great write !
Thank you!
Ohhhhh PRINCESS ~ this is sad ! I read your poem and commented on it ~ it was beautiful. I cannot understand how anyone could be offended about it' I thought it mirrored me and so so enjoyed. Keep writing PRINCESS you are a lovely poet and we need you (and your elegant poems) on MPS ~ Yours BRIAN
Thank you so much Brian! I love reading your comments! You are always so kind and uplifting!
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