paint me a picture

_Lily_fortune_

Try to tell people what's on your mind and nobody wants to know ,

before you can finish your sentence they end it with a no ,

so you think there's no one there who cares but you just haven't opened your eyes,

see who's really there for you it's NOBODY in discies ,

It may not be the perfect person but they'll be there when your hurting ,

anD even thought I can't find a rhyme for the end , 

they will be there to paint you a perfect picture 

And it won't be pretend x

 

 

  • Author: _Lily_fortune_ (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 31st, 2016 18:46
  • Comment from author about the poem: its quite late at night but the reason I wrote this is because it's something that's important to me meaning I know what it's like to be ignored by friends and things like that and I hate seeing that others (no matter what your age) now I know you all might be abit older than me I just want you to remmember to never ignore someone to make them feel bad . Anyway enough to said about that I hope u enjoyed my poem and please feel free to comment what u think :)
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  • Tony36

    Awesome, Awesome write

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    Thanks for sharing LILY ~ Love the poem and the message it brings. As you know I am an encourager and I welcome all the new Poets on MPS and encourage them in their writing. Whatever age we are ~ being ignored is the worse thing we have to endure. I promise (hand on heart) never ever to ignore anybody ever again ! Love BRIAN



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