all I want to say is hello
but I know that I must go
because though I want to stay
I know all will go away
please don't think about me anymore
I just want to close the door
and start all over without you
oh, please don't be so blue
the more I think the more I sleep
not anymore do I weep
I think about the days gone by
I know I must say goodbye
once the time has past
I know I will be with peace at last
ah, here's all that I wish
to become something else but amiss
not anymore do I think
my ship will soon begin to sink
and as I begin to drift away
I hope my death will be okay
I see the moon and sun
but of you I see none
all my life has gone by
and this is my final goodbye
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daniellemiller7 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: sometimes I write randomly, I know it's not great but it's the first I've done in a while.
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Danielle,
Very interesting. Beautiful and sad. I hope writing and sharing helps you. Getting out these bad feelings instead of sitting on them.
Welcome to the club 😎
WELCOME DANIELLE (LOVELY NAME) ~ Thanks for your first poem on MPS ~ a bit melancholy but a cool approach to death ! Closing the door ~ sleeping ~ peace at last ~ sinking ship ~ final goodbye. I'm not afraid to die ~ but your perfect poem (quatrains & rhyming couplets) has given me a perfect perspective 1 By the way I am (33) and only one-third through my life (I hope) but we have all got to die some day ! Thanks for sharing more please ~ Yours BRIAN
A very sad poem. Death is a release from our pain and hurt. To die with nature is all we can hope for. I really liked this poem.
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