Truthful lies
Said again
Wrong words
Heard before.
Cursed by Fate
Weary lives
Sold in discount
Truthful lies.
Love delayed
Stayed short
Vows betrayed
Heard before .
Utterly desolated
Human lives
Illuminated by
Truthful lies.
Said Again
Heard Before
Truthful Lies....
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Author:
lysistrata (
Offline) - Published: September 1st, 2016 11:04
- Comment from author about the poem: Started with the intention to write a Villanelle,but there is great joy when a writer is breaking the rules/ patterns and composing something that in her own view could be new & equal interesting... Writers like James Joyce,TS.Eliot, V.Nabokov,J. Barnes and many more have done it before...
- Category: Special occasion
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Comments2
Thanks LYSI ~ Poetic rules of form and function are always meant to be broken because all true poets are FREE SPIRITS ! Love the visual MISTER POGGY rather than Miss Piggy. I will analyse the form later ~ love all modes which have repetition ! We all use "truthful lies" when we are in a corner (even me !) Thanks for caring ~ Love as always BRIAN If you have tome please check my latest poem HAPPINESS ~ Thanks B
Wonderful write
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