Don't play with a heart,
you will cause much grief.
Even if the moment's brief,
that man has broken apart.
I gave you all I had,
now I am sad.
You used to call me hun,
but it looks like I'm done.
You said you didn't want me
now I can plainly see.
my friends were right,
I don't need your light.
At first it was vague,
but now I've realized you're a plague.
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Codeman6311 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I wrote this while reflecting on my relationship choices, I hope you like it.
- Category: Reflection
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Comments3
Hungry is supposed to be Hun, like the pet name
You can edit the poem after you write it. It's right underneath your views on the poem. Great poem, I really liked it.
Thanks
You're welcome
WELCOME CODEMAN ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ elegant in style replete with Rhyme & Rhythm easy to read and recite. The content is something we all experience ~ the Agony & Ecstasy of LOVE. I'm 33 and still not married because like you I find imperfections in my relationships with Ladies even when (like you) I have given all I had. I have many female friends and some are generous with their favours to sustain both our libidos ! I hope one day (soon ?) to meat some who ticks all my boxes and vice-versa ~ hope springs eternal ........... THANKS for caring and sharing ~ BRIAN # Please check my latest poem COLORS OF AUTUMN ~ Thanks B
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