Should i try my hand with poetry?
Perhaps not, laying in bed with only excuses in my head.
Some part of me hopes i find relief in this.
Another only hopes relief finds me.
I do not stumble through these words , the voice in my head ever guiding.
Knowing what i do not, and that this life may yet be more.
It edges me foward, not by blade but by promise of hope.
That tomorrow may yet be a new day, and i might not find myself alone.
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Author:
Vinceau (
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WELCOME VINCEAU ~ Thanks for sharing your first poem.~ lovely in form and full of hope for a new day ~when you are not ALONE. Poetry is very soothing and i enjoyed the gentleness of this one. Modern poetry has no rules of rhyme or rhythm and this is an excellent exmple of flowing "free verse" ~ You might not have realised this ! Poetry is written from the Heart and not the Head ! Thanks ~ more please ~ BRIAN Please check my latest poem ~ COLORS OF AUTUMN ~ Thanks BRIAN (UK)
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