God got busy and started to paint.
He used a seven-color palette scheme
on the sky’s immense canvas.
A big colorful arch in the sky
a spectrum of beauty, a prism of
colors scattering nuances all about.
The prettiness of the colors displayed
the brilliance of His handiwork.
Red, Orange, Yellow, Green, Blue,
Indigo and Violet are colors he used.
The steep blushed-red expresses his love,
The sunrise orange is the warmth of his embrace,
The topaz golden yellow hue the joy his Spirit brings,
The emerald-green is the phosphorescence lake of tranquility,
The azure sky reminds us of the peace he gives,
The indigo soft scarlet bells twinkle and chime in morning dew
And the violet, as a sweet-ripe plum nourishing us.
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Author:
rrodriguez (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I wanted to meditate on the beauty of the rainbow, so I wrote this poem. Enjoy!
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A beautifully descriptive piece, The flow and overall feeling you get just reading the words puts you at ease. Great write fellow poet.
Thank you for your kind words. I've been out of this site for awhile. I've been writing poems in Spanish, but I'm but with this one. You've just made my day with your kind words. Thank you!
Your welcome, I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.
BEAUTIFUL POEM ~ God is very generous and uses the whole palette to paint a Rainbow R O Y G B I V ! I love the appellations you give the colors ~ excellent. Pleased to have you back ~ Hasta manana ~ Tu Amigo BRIAN. Please check my latest poem PLANET EARTH ~ Thanks B
Thank you Brian, you certainly know how to analyze a poem. I will read your poem.
Wonderfully beautiful poem
A vividly beautiful poem with great reach and depth. I would drop the word 'cute' if it were
mine and just say "A prism of nuances ..."
Yes, sir... thank you... I cherish your comments and recommendation.
Done! thank you, my friend and mentor.
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