P E N E L O P E
P ERFECTION in every way possible
E xcellent in her appearance and manners
N one other of the Ladies I knew could
E ven come close to her Body ~ Mind ~ Spirit
L adies like Penelope are as rare & precious as Emeralds
O ne day she told me the sad news ~ her Family are
P reparing to leave England to live abroad and are
E migrating to AUSTRALIA ! God I wish I was a KANGAROO !
Thanks for reading ~ comments welcome ~ Love to all BRIAN XOX
This happened to me when I was 20 she was 17 ~ I'm still recovering
Has anything like this ever happened to you ? Australia is on another Planet !
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Author:
BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: September 5th, 2016 02:31
- Category: Love
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Great write
THANKS TONY ~ MPS is a wonderful site and it enables us to share our experiences in poetry ~ BRIAN
I agree MSP is Awesome, welcome
nothing can stop you for finding your love. be flexible, creative and with humour
hugs and love
avigail
YES INDEED AVI ~ Love is all around ~ Hugs and Love ~ BRIAN
Very nice! The end is hilarious. A kangaroo, really?
Or perhaps a SHEEP they outnumber the MEN ~ but Kangas are more attractive ~ and better JUMPERS ! Thanks BRIAN
Wow! Your work is outstanding Brain, can't wait to read more! your very talented.
Thanks EMILY ~ Loved your poem too. MPS is a fantastic site and it's all about carin' an' sharin; ~ Yours BRIAN Latest poem is ~ POETRY IS ........? Thanks B
Omg Simply beautiful yet a little sad too.
That is true ANGEL ~ she was very special ~ who knows and I'm still single @ 33 ! Love you BRIAN
Lovely! I enjoyed the word play, keeping her name at the forefront of her description. A little whimsical at the end (pleasant surprise)..
Thanks SFOC ~ there should always be a sting in the tail ! Acrostics are lovely poems because ~ as you say ~ they always ameloprate the title. Yours BRIAN
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