When you touched me, I cried.
I cried a cry that you couldn't see or hear, no matter how closely you observed.
It was a cry of feeling so alone, tormented, messy, and confused.
It spelt out I love you and I want you, but you didn't know that.
You couldn't have imagined the thoughts and emotions rushing through me, it was like a wave crashing into my soul.
A few seconds before you hugged me, I was thinking please don't do it.
In that moment you did it, everything hit me like a bolt of lightning.
You did this, you did this to me and still had the nerve to say go find someone.
I did find someone, years ago, it was you.
The trouble is I found you at the wrong time, the time you lost feeling, the time you completely changed in the worst way.
You shut me out and still called me a part of your life.
Now can you tell me you care?
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Author:
Felicity Jones (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I fell in love over time with my best friend who abandoned me. He used to have feelings for me, but he somehow lost them.
- Category: Sad
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Comments1
Wow...this is a great write. Very few poems I read can affect me in any kind of way...for some reason this one did. Excellent job
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