Calm as the night,
Wild as the ocean waves.
Forceful fight,
But never caves.
Whispering trees,
Rustling wind.
Life never frees,
From a time well sinned.
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Author:
katiepoo7447 (
Offline) - Published: September 8th, 2016 19:29
- Comment from author about the poem: This sort of just came to me. It's one of my only poems I've written that rhymes. I hope you enjoy it.
- Category: Reflection
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WELCOME KATIE ~ Thanks for sharing a very beautiful first poem. Short bu busting with Rhyme Rhythm and Reason ! Life in the 21st C is very restless and dynamic ~ but also with small Oasis of calm. Rhyme make a poem easier to read and recite but the key factor is rhythm. I love your ultimate line ~ "From a time well sinned! ~ so frank ~ it is so true of all because we all sin and fall short of God's Glory, More please ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
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