I've been called by many things,
But Evil is my name
I live within the hearts of men,
Where hatred stays the same
I'm sure you think you know me,
But I'm not the man you see
I'm only just a figment of,
Your own insanity
I prey upon your darkest fear,
And feed on all your pain
I shatter every dream you've had,
Til nothing else remains
I'll slowly take your very life,
Just one breath at a time
And destroy all that which makes you you
Til everything is mine
Even though I'm not alone,
So many take the fall
The only thing we have to fear,
Is the Evil in us all
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Awesome write
Thanks Tony.....I appreciate that
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Very true JEFF ~ Satan is a roaring LION seeking whom he may devour. Christians however are indwelt by the Holy Spirit of God and he is greaterr then SATAN ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN
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Man..EVIL IS JUST LUVE SPELLED BACKWARD..THERE IS NO REASON TO FEAR SOMETHING WHICH HAS NOT HAD THE CHANCE TO HaRM U..YOU ARE THE ONLY ONE WHO CAN MAKE THAT DECISION..FEAR IS A PUSSY..A WEAK LITTLE COWARD PUSSY DEMON..I LOVED THIS BODY OF WORK AND IT WAS VERY WELL WRITTEN.IT DOES APPLY TO MANY..BUT SOMETHING IN MY INTUITIVE PROCESS TELLS ME THAT U ARE NOT ONE OF THAT FLOCK..I CAN TELL EVEN MORE SO BY ur reaction to my work and WHICH ONes STIRRED IN U WHAT RESPONSES..IN ANY EVENT BRUTHA..EXCELLENT JOB HERE...
Thanks for the comment...i really appreciate it.
well,it is much deserved so you are very welcome.
Has a nice flow and rhythm.
Very understandable.
Portrays theme in depth but with brevity.
Liked it a lot.
Thank you for the time to comment...I really appreciate it
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