She loved you for your spirit
For your guts, your game
And now she won't go near it
She won't speak your name
You were much too real
That's why she ran
You tried to make her feel
You silly, silly man
You made just enough cracks
In her walls made of stone
You got her to relax
Taught her how not to be alone
And while she felt free as ever
As her world opened up
Her heart light as a feather
She wanted to feel stuck
The openness was daunting
She had nowhere to hide
Your love was haunting
She could only go inside
Inside of herself, that is
Back in her abyss
Where she comfortably sits
Safe from happiness
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Author:
SheWasTheSun (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I just started school and a new job, and haven't even had time to think about writing. But I felt like I needed to tonight.
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Comments3
Nice write. Like it a lot.
Thank you! That means a lot to me
Thanks ANGEL for a very challenging poem. In my relationships with Females I try to let them take the lead and never ever move to fast. You are all very very precious and I would hate to think I was a "Silly Man" who pushed a Girl back ~ inside herself ! This is a beautifully written poem ~ neat quatrains with a consistent abab ~ cdcd etc rhyming pattern. Thanks for sharing ~ more please ~ BRIAN (UK)
Thank you so much Brian!
An excellent write..Very well done
Thank you!
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