Dear Future Husband


Sitting around & thinking

Of you

You’re all in my head

I don’t know what

To do

So instead I sit & wonder

Are you thinking of me

Or another?

Awake I lay in bed

With crazy thoughts of you

Running through my head

You have me dazed

Like a deer in headlights

But shhh & lay down

With me just for tonight

  • Author: Destiny (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 13th, 2016 14:21
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 34


  • Stephanie Showers

    I like this! Its full of possibility and wonder.

  • taylerdk21

  • Jeff

    A great write

    • taylerdk21

      thank you Jeff. I appreciate it.


      WELCOME TYLER ~ Thanks for sharing a lovely poem in Structure (replete with rhyme & rhythm) and Subject ~ Dreaming of your Future Husband ! "Lay your head on my pillow ................. !". I love the way the poem ends ~ the longing and dreaming becomes reality in Dream Love. As Stephanie says "Your elegant Dream Love Poem is full of possibility and wonder" Awesome ~ mor please ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)

      • taylerdk21

        oh thank you so much Brian. reading your comment really made me smile and extremely happy inside. and not to worry I have plenty more poems that I will be sharing with you and others. thanks again and happy writing.

      • Tony36

        Awesome write

      • ses

        Loved feeling what you wrote , thanks for sharing. 👍🏽

        • taylerdk21

          no problem and thanks for the feedback

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