Sitting around & thinking
Of you
You’re all in my head
I don’t know what
To do
So instead I sit & wonder
Are you thinking of me
Or another?
Awake I lay in bed
With crazy thoughts of you
Running through my head
You have me dazed
Like a deer in headlights
But shhh & lay down
With me just for tonight
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Author:
Destiny (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: September 13th, 2016 14:21
- Category: Love
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Comments6
I like this! Its full of possibility and wonder.
A great write
thank you Jeff. I appreciate it.
WELCOME TYLER ~ Thanks for sharing a lovely poem in Structure (replete with rhyme & rhythm) and Subject ~ Dreaming of your Future Husband ! "Lay your head on my pillow ................. !". I love the way the poem ends ~ the longing and dreaming becomes reality in Dream Love. As Stephanie says "Your elegant Dream Love Poem is full of possibility and wonder" Awesome ~ mor please ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
oh thank you so much Brian. reading your comment really made me smile and extremely happy inside. and not to worry I have plenty more poems that I will be sharing with you and others. thanks again and happy writing.
Awesome write
Loved feeling what you wrote , thanks for sharing. 👍🏽
no problem and thanks for the feedback
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