I have poisonous lips
And murderous eyes
My heart is like ice
My mind is full of lies
If you look at me
You won't ever see
The aching inside
Or the fear that I hide
The pain runs deep
Its dull and bittersweet
It burns like a raging fire
I can't take the heat.
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Ohhhh my Sweet Kohora an elegant poem with such a bitter taste ! lips ~ eyes ~ heart ~ mind all out of order. Can any of us "take the heat" of 21st C life & love ? I look OK on the outside HONEY but inside .................. I empathise with you. Thanks for sharing ~ inside out ~ That's why i love you BRIAN XOX
Thank you Brian, you are so kind.
Wow! such emotion packed into such few lines, very well done!
thanks.
Sounds like you don't get invited out much and if I saw you coming down the street I would cross to the other side. Wow. And I have had the opportunity to meet that type of individual and have been surprised to find a real decent human being. Thanks for sharing. Nice and concise. Reads well.
Thank you. I often find myself alone, and then I think too much...
Excellent write, an emotional firestorm in so few lines
Thank you for taking the time to read.
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