It's tough sometimes to see it her way, when you know the for real explanation.
She pleads with you, that you'll agree, she does so with determination.
You stand your ground, a very closed mind, you stare at each other and think.
As long as it takes, face to face, let's see whose first to blink.
But, you saw the crumbs upon her hand, it's a slam-dunk case.
Just give the kid the benefit of the doubt, she's got the cutest face.
- Author: WriteBeLight ( Offline)
- Published: September 19th, 2016 12:49
- Category: Humor
- Views: 84
Comments2
Great write
Thanks! I edited it again. Had a problem (in my own mind) of the rythmn. I appreciate your comment.
Welcome
WELCOME WBL ~ Thanks for your first poem ! It does have rhythm but would been better written in EIGHT LINES It's tough to see it their way # When you know for the real explanation etc etc. It also has rhyme which makes it easier to recite. The humour is in the description of those refuse to face the truth. Thanks BRIAN ~ please check my Poems ~ Thanks B
Got it thanks. I wanted to write more. Getting used to seeing it on line. Thanks for your advise🙂
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