A Virgin and her Bloke

Hurry! Run,run....

I want to capture the rhythm of the sun set

As it melts like a lump of  sugar in  a teabag.

What? NOT a trace of excitement?!


Wait! Stop,stop....

I want to capture the tremble of

 your empty hands

As they lift my huge swellling heart.


What? NOT a trace of anxiety?!


Come! Slowly,slowly...

I want You to capture my happy   hormones

I admit. I am ready for indecent  exposure.


What? The excitement has taken

over You?!

Thumbs UP for your success to

become a joke.



  • Tony36

    Great write


    Thanks LYSI for a very ingenious poem about the way of a Man with a Maid. Each verse takes us closer to the climax. Thanks for sharing. Please check my Angel Poem and my Fusion Poem ~ DO YOU BELIEVE IN ANGELS. Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN


    very interesting piece....different...I like it

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