Notice Me


You didn't know about

the pain i went


You see me day & night

yet you never


You never saw how

I struggled not

to cry

You didn't know that

I wished to


Down my cheeks my

tears would flow

But you never noticed

so how would you


  • Author: Destiny (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 21st, 2016 15:16
  • Comment from author about the poem: I wrote this at the beginning of this month & I wasn\'t sure if I wanted to share something so personal. But I figured I should, but only on here, not to my family or friends. Still it feels good to share and get it off my chest.
  • Category: Sad
  • Views: 48
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    Ohhhhhhhhh TAYLER ~ This a beautifully composed poem but with such a sad sad message. SO ...... Come on Beautiful ~ pick yourself up and dry your eyes ~ Everything will be OK ~ I Promise ! Thanks for sharing ~ Love BRIAN

    • taylerdk21

      Thank you Brain for your comment. I really do appreciate all kinds of feed back.

    • Tony36

      Love it, wonderful write

    • Jeff

      It always seems to help...if only for a share. Great write

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