When I felt like I was a fish in a tank
when I knew that i was walking the plank
Despite my facade, you saw through it all
You held me back before long fall.
Because you were there
You would care
And now I hear your call
When I grew sick of everything bad being clapped
And when time passed and it all went black
When I stopped thinking of what I had but what I lacked
When days slipped by yet they had no impact
You were there
You would care
And now I want you back
You tied me down and wouldn't let me go
When I was screaming and the worlds spin began to slow
When my hearts beat was forced and would no longer flow
you were there
You would care
But where did you go?
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Author:
poetryfornow (
Offline) - Published: September 22nd, 2016 12:22
- Category: Friendship
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Comments4
WELCOME PFN ~ Thanks for an intriguing first poem ! It is well written replete with rhyme and rhythm ~ which makes it cool to read and recite ! When we are down for (whatever reason) we all need someone to to be there and care. If they "go away" we are devastated and very sad and alone, Every BLESSING ~ BRIAN Please check my poems ~ THANKS B
I liked the line about the world's spin. Thanks.
Great write
Such a beautiful flow. Thank you for the read 🙂
~RTBH
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