Darling, you are so hot you make me melt
Love your fragrance, liked the way you smelt
Have got me dripping, you are so very thick
Certainly do admire the length of your wick
We are both sweating, dripping wax, and a lot
Want to hug and kiss you but your'e far too hot
Last night our flames only flickered then went out
But as tonight goes on the flames have more clout
Before I met you I lived in a monastery with a nun
Was a boring life sweetheart and definitely no fun
Used to spread her legs and slip me up her spout
Yell and scream, near drown me then fling me out
Was sold at a garage sale, covered in dust and hair
So glad to get away from the nun and get some air
Soon met up with you and I'm now a lot happier by far
Have a new home here with you in a lovely candelabra
As the soft breezes blow we look at each other and snicker
You bring heat into my body and the flame starts to flicker
The hotter we get then the juices really start to flow
Melting away down our stems, amalgamating below
Our new owners are jealous, every morning without doubt
They come in with a smile and blow our loving flames out
We spend the next hours cold and waiting for days end
At night we'll be lit up once more and start loving again
Sure you love me too from the messages you send
I will love you forever dear or at least till my wick's end
My wax is so shiny these days I guess you are knowing
Youv'e really lit me up and you can see how I'm glowing
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Poeta de Cabra (Pseudonym) (
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GREAT POEM , LOVED IT !
Thank you Ses. I appreciate your comments
Good work...nice write
Thank you. Glad you enjoyed my poem
GRACIAS PDC POR UNA POEMA MUY PIQUANTE ! Love the metaphor of Candelabra Love The language lends itself to talk of WICKS ~ Dripping and Hot ~ Stanza 3 ~ graphic but true ! ~ candel ~ BRA ~ flowing juices (wax) ~ lit up ~ "Til my wicks end !"
loved te visual ! Burning the candle at both end could be painful ? Thanks for sharing ~ Please check my latest Poem ~ GIRL OF MY DREAMS ~ Thanks BRIAN
Glad you enjoyed my poem
Thank You for your uplifting comments
they are much appreciated
Love it Great write
Tony, I thank you for reading and commenting
glad you enjoyed
Welcome
very nice, clever piece you pen.
peace ww
Thanks Willy. Appreciate your comments, cheers
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