I Churn Cream To Make Butter
I churn cream to make butter
Twistin, pullin, rockin, sweatin,
Thinkin, lickin, tastin, checkin,
And Feelin!
Feelin the cream.
Feelin the excitement in chirren's eyes.
Feelin that I done done somethin.
Feelin tired and good.
There's more to churnin than churnin.
I churn for everythin!
Augustus / Folsom / September 2016
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Author:
Augustus (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This is one of the few poems I have written that came to me in it's entirety in minutes without making any changes. Usually I have to work hours on a poem, put it aside and come back to it days or a week later to rewrite or tweak in some way. "Chirren" is a colloquial spelling of children and was common in the Southern USA at the time of the writing.
- Category: Reflection
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Comments2
Thanks "A" We all love butter and we all love cream. But they are very different in taste and texture ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN please check my latest poem ~ Thanks B
Great write. being a country boy this brought back memories
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