We all got here without being asked,
After averaged years here, nobody will last.
So let’s be patient and compassionate.
When someone is stressed and in short fuse,
He may be in this survival mode, feels as he has nothing to lose.
So let’s be patient and compassionate.
When people argue and feel they hold the truth in their pocket,
Suggest some humor and a way of detachment, don’t simply shout: "why don’t you stop it'.
So let’s be patient and compassionate
When someone loses the track of what he or you were saying,
Its memory bugs, unless they are not interested, playing of faking.
Let’s be patient and compassionate.
Remember, we are all in this together.
A journey from somewhere to nowhere, how, why and whatever,
We all got here without being asked,
After averaged years here, we will all be passed.
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Good I like it
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Suggest some humor and a way of detachment, don’t simply shout: "why don’t you stop it'.
perhaps
Try humor, way of detachment instead of shouting "why don't you stop it?
thank u for your feedback
you are welcome
Thanks for sharing SWEETHEART ~ you echo my sentiments completely. I like MPS beacause it is a very tolrant site ! I am an encourager and (as you know) I am always Patient and Compassionate ~ just as you are ! Love you for being you ~ BRIAN XOX
u r very sweet Brain you are a great supporter - continue being u :)))
sounds like great advise
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