Entropy and life

avigail

 

Entropy is manifesting the outcome of universe implicit order.

Vitality and love are no longer holding things within border.

 

Energy get stuck instead of flowing.

New processes from within are “creatively”, showing.

 

External and the internal, separate no longer.

New rules for coexistence, take over.

  • Author: AVIGAIL (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 4th, 2016 08:28
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments4

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    Very erudite reasoning ! The entropy of Planet Earth is increasing because DISORDER is increasing. Concentrations of minerals are mined and their atome spread throughout the Earth. We strive for order but the natural cycles promote disorder ~ increased entropy. Thsi is why we fight a losing battles against pollution ~ global warming ~ etc. In the end increasing ENTROPY (disorder) will render the PLANET inhospitable for an advanced organism like Man ! It's not too late to restore order (and Law !) Thanks fo caring Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN Please check my latest poem ~ Thanks B

    • avigail

      thank you dear Brain, im hinting on observing different systems' order - that seem entropy like death

    • Tony36

      Great write. you always have some amazing insights

      • avigail

        thank u Tony 🙂

        • Tony36

          Welcome

        • Jeff

          This is why you are my favorite poet on here..lol...great job

          • avigail

            im honored :))) thank u Jeff

          • Augustus

            Order, disorder, chaos, equations are all too complex for me but I understand that "new rules are in order" or we in deep do do.

            • avigail

              funny.. your spirit will watch new order 🙂



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