Entropy is manifesting the outcome of universe implicit order.
Vitality and love are no longer holding things within border.
Energy get stuck instead of flowing.
New processes from within are “creatively”, showing.
External and the internal, separate no longer.
New rules for coexistence, take over.
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AVIGAIL (Pseudonym) (
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Very erudite reasoning ! The entropy of Planet Earth is increasing because DISORDER is increasing. Concentrations of minerals are mined and their atome spread throughout the Earth. We strive for order but the natural cycles promote disorder ~ increased entropy. Thsi is why we fight a losing battles against pollution ~ global warming ~ etc. In the end increasing ENTROPY (disorder) will render the PLANET inhospitable for an advanced organism like Man ! It's not too late to restore order (and Law !) Thanks fo caring Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN Please check my latest poem ~ Thanks B
thank you dear Brain, im hinting on observing different systems' order - that seem entropy like death
Great write. you always have some amazing insights
thank u Tony 🙂
Welcome
This is why you are my favorite poet on here..lol...great job
im honored :))) thank u Jeff
Order, disorder, chaos, equations are all too complex for me but I understand that "new rules are in order" or we in deep do do.
funny.. your spirit will watch new order 🙂
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