Ocean so pretty, clear and blue
Ocean for miles over I flew
Ocean creatures roaming free
Wonder what it would be like to live under the see
Colors so vivid and bright
Thousands of fish swimming around
They do not make a sound
Ocean so calm and peaceful such a beautiful site
Waves crashing on the beach at night
Ocean so pretty, clear and blue
Breezes blowing softly baby turtles make their debut
Ocean so large you cover the world
Ocean so pretty
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THANKS TERESA ~ A very nicely presented poem pulsating with rhyme and rhythm ~ very apposite for a poem about the sea ! The big difference is that the World they freely occupy is 3.dimensional and the Pacific Ocean is six miles deep ! There are specific layers in which species of fish dwell. The same is true of birds but the atmosphere (air) does not vary with depth as do the oceans. We inhabit a 2 dimensional World unless we are in an aeroplane or a bathysphere (submarine). The life of a fish must be awesome and you capture that in your perfect fishy tale ! Thanks for sharing ~ Love BRIAN Please check my poems ~ Thanks B .
thank you for your kind words as always Brian.
Nice
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