Give me your heart
and I'll give you a love poem
I'll sow the fibers into words
dot every "i" and cross every "t"
with what's left of the blood inside your arteries
I'll replace the spaces with cavities
so that the verse can breathe
I'll record the beat for passion
and tie it up with webs
made of capillaries
Then, carefully, I'll put it back
Trust me,
You won't feel a single stitch
When it's all done,
the warmth of my love will flood your body
and you'll squirm below the earth
for my company
Give me your heart
and I'll give you a love poem.
- Author: morbidcuriosity ( Offline)
- Published: October 15th, 2016 17:11
- Category: Love
- Views: 18
Comments1
WELCOME MC ~ Thanks for you first poem ~ Nice structure ~ well spaced "free verse" poem with plenty of rhythm which complemented the topic of HEART BEATS. It is very clinical in its description of a Heart Transplant ~ Replaced by a LOVE POEM , Christian Barnard said he was surprised by the cavity when he removed the heart ~ have to be a substantial poem ? But I see you replace the heart so all is well that ends well ! It seems a fair exchange ! Thanks for sharing ~ more please. Youirs BRIAN ~ Please check my poems THANKS..
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