I WANNA BREAK FREE ~ From things that really bovver me

Like Donald Trump & Hillary ~ Coastal erosion from the sea

Prices at my grocery ~ and why isn't  petrol free ?

Too many children refugee ~ I WANNA BREAK FREE !


I WANNA BREAK LOOSE ~ There's far too much Children Abuse

Watered down nat'ral orange juice ~ too many gunmen on the loose

Use of language too obtuse ~ no respect too much abuse

From the mates I didn't choose ~ I WANNA BREAK LOOSE !


I WANNA STEER CLEAR ~ From people that I fear

PUTIN who abuse good folk in Syria ~ Politicians bend my ear

Their diet neat whisky and beer ~ Who relish in the website smear

People who argue from the rear ~ I WANNA STEAR CLEAR


Please fly me to the Stars ~ Please just how far is MARS ?

I've had enuff ~ Please stop the World ~ I WANNA GET OFF !


This poem is presented as  4 4 4 2 sonnet ~ internal rhyme in each line 


Thanks for visiting ~ Are you ready to be a MARTIN ?

A lot depends where and how you live ~ Love to ALL BRIAN ~ XOX 





  • Author: BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 27th, 2016 15:00
  • Comment from author about the poem: STOP THE WORLD I WANT TO GET OFF ! From about 2050 we will have a choice EARTH or MARS ? Love BRIAN XOX
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 94
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  • Tony36

    Awesome write


      hanks TONY ~ I have upgraded it ~ please check BRIAN

      • Tony36


      • Christina8

        Really good message in your poem. I want the world to stop too, let me tell ya. Great poem!

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          THANKS CHRISSY ~ I aim for good structure and god content Yours BRIAN @ HUGS

        • Augustus

          Martian? Or a Martin, purple Martin, the bird. We could fly away with either. I just love your ideas like mixing serious with funny.

          • BRIAN & ANGELA

            THANKS "A" ~ ASTRONAUT or BIRD - TAKE YOUR PICK ~as long as we get off ! BRIAN

          • sincerelyallee

            "use of language too obtuse"...couldn't have said it better. good poem!

            • BRIAN & ANGELA

              Thanks ALLEE ~ Pleased you liked it ! BRIAN

            • grange_m


              • BRIAN & ANGELA

                Thanks GRANGE ~ COOL ~ I like that ! BRIAN

              • keeara45

                Very nice , so heart filled you are a great poet

                • BRIAN & ANGELA

                  Thanks KEEARA ~ pleased you liked it ~ Yours BRIAN

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