"It is what it is."says Love
"This is insane!" says Reason
"You'll regret it!" says Caution
"It'll cause you pain!" says Fear
"This is ridiculous!" says Pride
"It could end badly!" says Experience
"I'll be left in pieces!" says the heart.
"It is what it is." says Love
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Author:
Christina (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: A freestyle. Just something running through my head a few years ago when things were going badly.
- Category: Love
- Views: 44
- Users favorite of this poem: Liam Lawless, magno1988, kaitywaity31
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Yes, I agree. Nice idea.
Thanks!
Lovely poem. Very clever.
I usually dont do freestyle so thank you!
Thanks for saving it as a favorite. I am honored!
I've literally just registered on here and yours are the first 3 poems I've read - so great to read! I've been pulled in! Xx
If you like my poetry that much you can go to my homepage and click the star and save me as a favorite. But certainly I don't deserve that honor! Hugs
I like!
Thank you!
Love it awesome write
Thanks tony!
Welcome
Amazing idea! Very original and I'm glad I had a chance to read it! My favourite poem on here so far!
Well, that is a high honor! I don't usually dabble in freestyle poetry so it means a lot, magno! I appreciate it!
I agree with hodgetiger, clever! And thoughtful, thoughts that go through our minds when we deal with others.
Thanks Augustus! I don't do much freestyle. Means alot!
it is what it is,great line
Thanks very much!
THANKS YOU CHRIS ~ For a crisp and concise "Analyse d'Amour" ! Despite all the agony and ecstasy I'm still in the loop. They say love is BLIND but it is also DEAF ! It does not heed: reason ~ caution ~ fear ~ pride or experience ~ Such are its unique sensual and emotional rewards ! Perhaps ~ when all is said and done ~ The most important sense in LOVE is TOUCH ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN ~ BIG HUGS !
Thanks so much for your in depth reply! I don't often do freestyle writing. I appreciate it ever so much!!
it's different unusual and inspirational.. think outside the box I don't do that enough. thank you 🙂
This was the first attempt at free verse and it seemed to work out well for me. Thanks for taking the time to read my work!
The eternal struggle, the head and the heart. You capture it exact and in all its confused bliss.
Wonderful poem!
"All I can offer anyone is my own confusion." Jack Kerouac.
Thank you for your kind interpretation and quote!
a very impressive and original analysis/poem.. much liked by me.... N
well thank you so much! I appreciate it, friend!!---C
Good to know.. but my pleasure regardless.......
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