Christina8

Thoughts on love

"It is what it is."says Love

"This is insane!" says Reason

"You'll regret it!" says Caution

"It'll cause you pain!" says Fear

"This is ridiculous!" says Pride

"It could end badly!" says Experience

"I'll be left in pieces!" says the heart.

"It is what it is." says Love

Comments12

  • WriteBeLight

    Yes, I agree. Nice idea.

  • Anonamus

    Lovely poem. Very clever.

    • Christina8

      I usually dont do freestyle so thank you!

      • Christina8

        Thanks for saving it as a favorite. I am honored!

      • scorchedwings

        I've literally just registered on here and yours are the first 3 poems I've read - so great to read! I've been pulled in! Xx

        • Christina8

          If you like my poetry that much you can go to my homepage and click the star and save me as a favorite. But certainly I don't deserve that honor! Hugs

        • Vic E

          I like!

        • Tony36

          Love it awesome write

          • Christina8

            Thanks tony!

            • Tony36

              Welcome

            • magno1988

              Amazing idea! Very original and I'm glad I had a chance to read it! My favourite poem on here so far!

              • Christina8

                Well, that is a high honor! I don't usually dabble in freestyle poetry so it means a lot, magno! I appreciate it!

              • Augustus

                I agree with hodgetiger, clever! And thoughtful, thoughts that go through our minds when we deal with others.

                • Christina8

                  Thanks Augustus! I don't do much freestyle. Means alot!

                • ron parrish aka wordman

                  it is what it is,great line

                  • Christina8

                    Thanks very much!

                  • BRIAN & ANGELA

                    THANKS YOU CHRIS ~ For a crisp and concise "Analyse d'Amour" ! Despite all the agony and ecstasy I'm still in the loop. They say love is BLIND but it is also DEAF ! It does not heed: reason ~ caution ~ fear ~ pride or experience ~ Such are its unique sensual and emotional rewards ! Perhaps ~ when all is said and done ~ The most important sense in LOVE is TOUCH ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN ~ BIG HUGS !

                    • Christina8

                      Thanks so much for your in depth reply! I don't often do freestyle writing. I appreciate it ever so much!!

                    • kaitywaity31

                      it's different unusual and inspirational.. think outside the box I don't do that enough. thank you :)

                      • Christina8

                        This was the first attempt at free verse and it seemed to work out well for me. Thanks for taking the time to read my work!

                      • JohnThomas

                        The eternal struggle, the head and the heart. You capture it exact and in all its confused bliss.
                        Wonderful poem!

                        "All I can offer anyone is my own confusion." Jack Kerouac.

                        • Christina8

                          Thank you for your kind interpretation and quote!

                        • Neville

                          a very impressive and original analysis/poem.. much liked by me.... N

                          • Christina8

                            well thank you so much! I appreciate it, friend!!---C

                            • Neville

                              Good to know.. but my pleasure regardless.......



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