nicolerobbo

Female Teenagers

A kiss feels love, which is above

falling deeper,feeling loved.

When i kiss you my heart misses a beat,

then i feel cherished and feel the heat.

Getting lost will help you find your way,

just keep going for another day.

Time will fly, itll go by,

Being female feels like a fail.

Some girls aint seen,

people doesnt treat them like a teen,

getting called ugly and uncool.

But really the one who are naming are a fool.

Its not about popularity,

but giving clarity on your personality.

if you believe you will achieve, take a step forward dont disbelieve.

Most females cut,

crying help,strook in a rut,

some goes through hell

they dont know if they should tell.

goes through depression

everybody starts to question

Comments6

  • WriteBeLight

    It is tough out there. Your poem reflects a strong individual. I like it.

    • nicolerobbo

      yep it sure is and thank you x

    • BSmooth

      You are very superior at poems.. Good one abd keep it up hun

      • nicolerobbo

        awe thank you, and i will keep it up

      • littlegoat23

        Great job. I encourage you to keep it up, and maybe add more to this one because it feels like maybe you weren't finished with it.

        • nicolerobbo

          thanks, n i will keep it up also i just need to finish it i just wanted to see if it was good so far x

          • littlegoat23

            Lol I understand. It is great!!!

          • Tony36

            Keep going, awesome write

            • nicolerobbo

              thank you x

              • Tony36

                Welcome

              • Christina8

                Great job on this poem! I see alot of strength in you!

              • nic

                I'm guessing you'll know where I'm coming from when I say;
                See, I knew I should have been a female, I can relate all too well... thank you for sharing, it's a beautiful piece, but I agree littlegoat23, it feels unfinished. Keep up the wonderful work. I look forward to seeing more from you.

                • nicolerobbo

                  yep, and i like to share new things for everyone to understand do you get what i mean. and you will see more from me



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