A kiss feels love, which is above
falling deeper,feeling loved.
When i kiss you my heart misses a beat,
then i feel cherished and feel the heat.
Getting lost will help you find your way,
just keep going for another day.
Time will fly, itll go by,
Being female feels like a fail.
Some girls aint seen,
people doesnt treat them like a teen,
getting called ugly and uncool.
But really the one who are naming are a fool.
Its not about popularity,
but giving clarity on your personality.
if you believe you will achieve, take a step forward dont disbelieve.
Most females cut,
crying help,strook in a rut,
some goes through hell
they dont know if they should tell.
goes through depression
everybody starts to question
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Author:
Nicole Sarah Robinson (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: About female teens, some things they go through and more. It took time to write this* Please comment what you think**
- Category: Family
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It is tough out there. Your poem reflects a strong individual. I like it.
yep it sure is and thank you x
You are very superior at poems.. Good one abd keep it up hun
awe thank you, and i will keep it up
Great job. I encourage you to keep it up, and maybe add more to this one because it feels like maybe you weren't finished with it.
thanks, n i will keep it up also i just need to finish it i just wanted to see if it was good so far x
Lol I understand. It is great!!!
Keep going, awesome write
thank you x
Welcome
Great job on this poem! I see alot of strength in you!
awe thank you x
I'm guessing you'll know where I'm coming from when I say;
See, I knew I should have been a female, I can relate all too well... thank you for sharing, it's a beautiful piece, but I agree littlegoat23, it feels unfinished. Keep up the wonderful work. I look forward to seeing more from you.
yep, and i like to share new things for everyone to understand do you get what i mean. and you will see more from me
This is a very understanding poem from an understanding writer. Thank you for putting this out there. It shows plot and meaning for readers to interpret and enjoy!
Thank you and I written this years ago .
Of course! This is one of the first poems I found on teens and depression. I'm glad I found it. 🙂
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