I look in the sky I feel but don't see you
Rather the sky was dark or sky blue you give me chills knowing I'm still with you my brother from another mother has always been so true. There was a time I needed you I picked up my phone and I was crying too idk it's something about you. You was a Angel sent from heaven above, we laughed we chilled we shared friendly love my brother from another mother I miss you forever and always I don't wish you back because your in a better place seeing a better face I know God will keep you safe. My brother from another mother you was the hero without the cape the milk without the shake the frosting without the cake my brother from another mother blood couldn't make us any closer we fixed we build we did everything together we talked about life walking through the rain and cold weather. My brother from another mother I hope you hear me I miss you I really do the love is real and so true my brother from another mother I needed to clear my head so I wrote this for you.
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Author:
Mina (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 3rd, 2016 03:03
- Category: Family
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Aww so sorry for your step brother, how did he die? But your poem is moving and excellent in dirge like style and u wrote it in poetic rhyming and sentiments. ESP love the cake without frosting lines.
And like u said wisely he is in a beta place now pal. Thumbs up.
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WELCOME MINA ~ Thank you for a very moving first poem . It is very ersonal and written in a flowwing prose style and yet replete with rhyme and rhythm. Step Brother % Sisters can be a great bleesing and I like your phrase "BROTHER FROM ANOTHER MOTHER" which adds poignancy to your poem. I trust you found writing this poem cathartic. I am pleased you have assurance inn your heart that your brother is in a better place. Thanks for caring ~ Yours BRIAN.
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Thanks MINA ~ Thanks for being my MPS Friend ~ BRIAN
Wonderful tribute
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