How shall I describe my love ? More precious
Than emeralds of purest green ~ the best
Her emerald eyes pierce my heart with deep love
Her soul connects with my soul ~ we are one !
Her ruby lips kiss mine with pure passion
Which causes our love to explode inside
Irresistible libido flows from
A perfect kiss ~ must be satiated !
Her bosoms are cushions of soft velevet
Her thighs pillars of smooth silk to guard the
Entrance to her "Mound of Venus" which is
Barred to all who would enter ~ except me !
Our Consummation of Love is Divine'
How shall I describe my love ? PERFECTION !
Thanks for reading ~ Please comment ~ Our love to all ~ BRIAN XOX
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Author:
BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 5th, 2016 06:49
- Comment from author about the poem: LOVE POETRY ~ Is the most pure form of poetry and the Sonnet is its perfect form. Despite the plethora of perfect love poems we all try to add our own. I hope you will accept this from our hearts. Love to All ~ BRIAN XOX
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This makes me believe in true love, if im honest, and thats alot for me to say - beauty personified
Thanks you MOON CHILD and I am pleased you enjoyd it. We all seek for TRUE LOVE and whenever we find it it lifts our whole being onto higher plane. I have experienced many levels of love ~ BUT ~ "Once in a while along the way ~ Love's been good to me" My relationship with my current GF is perfection. I trust and pray that you will find tRUE LOVE very soon ~ Yours with HUGS ~ BRIAN X
Wonderfully expressive and awesome write
Thanks TONY ~ Pleased it resonated with you ~ BRIAN
Welcome
You have described love and being in love and making love in detail...looks like loves been good to you! great job on the iambic pentameter! Hugs! Christina
Thanks CHRIS that is a perfect comment I know you have great respect for ladies (as do I) and also for poetic form. I thought my portfolio was ripe fpr a Love Poem ~ So I wrote a sonnet from my heart and my experience ! Once in a while along the way ~ Love's been good to me ! Love and Hugs BRIAN
Erotic. Careful, I am an old man. I am not sure my heart can take this. Very nice.
Thanks "A" pleased you enjoyed it ! Mt GRANDAD tells me we are never too old for love # AMEN BRIAN
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