Love is like a river
rushing to its destiny.
Not knowing where
it may lead us.
Trusting it will take
us away from the dam.
And toward something
beautiful and idyllic.
There is a calm at the
end of the river.
And he is there to greet me.
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Author:
Christina (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 5th, 2016 10:04
- Comment from author about the poem: Trying freestyle. Be gentle!
- Category: Love
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Comments4
Thanks CHRIS ~ Loved the style ~ structure and subject The beauty of "free style" poetry is it is not "rhyme constrained " which give you infinite word choice ! However a poem must have rhythm and this you have achieved by having lines of similar lentgh. Well done an excellent FV Poem and I love the last line ! It takes TWO to TANGO ~ Special Hugs from your Special Friend BRIAN
I appreciate it! I tried to throw that first metaphor in there and then.....I'm not sure if freestyle is for me. But thanks for reading and enjoying. Hugs Christina
Lovely Chrissy... Told with imagery and depth with a soft and gentle tone. Bravo my friend.
Thank you so much. Encouraging because I usually do not write in this way.
Nice allegory .
Thanks Augustus, I appreciate it!
lovely work Chrissy8. nice flow( no pun intended) good structure write on! ww
Thanks, I appreciate it!
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