The River

Christina8

Love is like a river

rushing to its destiny.

Not knowing where

it may lead us.

Trusting it will take

us away from the dam.

And toward something

beautiful and idyllic.

There is a calm at the

end of the river.

And he is there to greet me.

  • Author: Christina (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 5th, 2016 10:04
  • Comment from author about the poem: Trying freestyle. Be gentle!
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 62
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  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    Thanks CHRIS ~ Loved the style ~ structure and subject The beauty of "free style" poetry is it is not "rhyme constrained " which give you infinite word choice ! However a poem must have rhythm and this you have achieved by having lines of similar lentgh. Well done an excellent FV Poem and I love the last line ! It takes TWO to TANGO ~ Special Hugs from your Special Friend BRIAN

    • Christina8

      I appreciate it! I tried to throw that first metaphor in there and then.....I'm not sure if freestyle is for me. But thanks for reading and enjoying. Hugs Christina

    • Melody

      Lovely Chrissy... Told with imagery and depth with a soft and gentle tone. Bravo my friend.

      • Christina8

        Thank you so much. Encouraging because I usually do not write in this way.

      • Augustus

        Nice allegory .

        • Christina8

          Thanks Augustus, I appreciate it!

        • willyweed

          lovely work Chrissy8. nice flow( no pun intended) good structure write on! ww

          • Christina8

            Thanks, I appreciate it!



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