Darkness inside me

Kitkat231997

darkness inside me 

By kat m

How can no one see

That I am in pain 

That I need help 

 

Someone open your eye

Help me please 

The darkness is coming 

 

I can't stop it

Someone help

Anyone help me

 

It's tearing me apart

Someone anyone 

Help me

 

  • Author: Kitkat231997 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 5th, 2016 16:57
  • Comment from author about the poem: I going through some bad news that hurt me and its just swallowing me whole
  • Category: Gothic
  • Views: 34
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  • Kitkat231997

    Please tell me what you think

  • Christina8

    Welcome to the site!. Very sad write. I hope you find the help you seek.

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    WELCOME KIT ~ Thanks for your elegant poem ~ elegantly written but with a very sad message. This is a very supportive site and we are all thinking of you. Thanks for sharing I hope you found it helpful to share. ~ Yours.BRIAN ~ Please check my Poems ~ thanks B

  • Augustus

    Welcome. It often helps to write about it. Sometimes we feel like a voice in the wilderness. Your free verse describes your pain in short poignant phrases.

  • littlegoat23

    I love this poem and you are not alone. You are able to get your point across in few words and with such power. Please write more

    • Kitkat231997

      i posted another poem

    • WildMoonChild

      short but strong

    • Kitkat231997

      Thanks for the comments everyone

    • Kitkat231997

      i just posted a new poem



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