darkness inside me
By kat m
How can no one see
That I am in pain
That I need help
Someone open your eye
Help me please
The darkness is coming
I can't stop it
Someone help
Anyone help me
It's tearing me apart
Someone anyone
Help me
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Author:
Kitkat231997 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I going through some bad news that hurt me and its just swallowing me whole
- Category: Gothic
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Welcome to the site!. Very sad write. I hope you find the help you seek.
WELCOME KIT ~ Thanks for your elegant poem ~ elegantly written but with a very sad message. This is a very supportive site and we are all thinking of you. Thanks for sharing I hope you found it helpful to share. ~ Yours.BRIAN ~ Please check my Poems ~ thanks B
Welcome. It often helps to write about it. Sometimes we feel like a voice in the wilderness. Your free verse describes your pain in short poignant phrases.
I love this poem and you are not alone. You are able to get your point across in few words and with such power. Please write more
i posted another poem
short but strong
Thanks for the comments everyone
i just posted a new poem
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