THERE'S SOMETHING ABOUT HIM
SOMETHING SO DIFFERENT AND SPECIAL
SOMETHING THAT TELLS ME HE'S THE ONE
MAYBE ITS JUST A DREAM
MAYBE THIS COULD REALLY BE SOMETHING
BUT WHATEVER IT IS
IT FEELS SO REAL
AND IT FEELS SO RIGHT
HIS SMILE LIGHTS UP MY MOOD
AND BRINGS HAPPINESS TO MY LIFE
HE'S EVERYTHING FOR THE MOMENT
THIS CAN'T BE REAL.
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Author:
MeraGreen (
Offline) - Published: November 7th, 2016 21:49
- Comment from author about the poem: I'm catching deep feelings for this guy but it seems too good to be true. is this real or is this just a dream?
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I really liked it
thank you
Welcome to MPS! Great first poem! Very nice! I hope it works out for you.
WELCOME MERA ~ Love the structure and subject of yourfirst poem for MSP. I use capitals fro emphasis and to pen your whole poem in caps means this is very real for you. There are GUYS like the one you describe ~@ so believe it's real hold him tight and never let him go ! IT CAN BE REAL ! Every Blessing ~ BRIAN
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