Paint me a picture,
Good taste and mixture.
Good memories that fade and flicker.
Beautiful beauteous Boy I see you,
You flutter rapidly past my eyes and by my side.
Like a dimensional picture
You architect, so I free you to get the scripture.
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Author:
Nicole Sarah Robinson (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 8th, 2016 03:40
- Category: Love
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Comments4
This is lovely x
thank you lass x
BEAUTIFUL MESSAGE NICOLE ~ In our minds we all paint pictures of our objects of desire BEAUTIFUL BOYS for you and GORGEOUS GIRLS for me ! When we meet the object of our dreams it mor than justifies our musing ! Love the poem ~ BRIAN X
thanks,
and took me time to write this. x
I can sense that NICOLE each word is perfectly balanced and adds its own quality to your elegant poem. Shorter poems often say the most ~ Yours BRIAN X
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Nice analogy.
thx x
Awesome and well done
ty x
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