Where did I go wrong? 

Did it start when we started?
Or did it start when we ended?
We were one,
now we are none.
I thought we couldn't go down
the wrong path.
But when I saw that red
fire of hate,
I new that we would never again
be best friends.


  • Author: Winter light (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 10th, 2016 11:36
  • Comment from author about the poem: I got this idea from the manga "Naruto!"
  • Category: Friendship
  • Views: 28
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    What a cheek to post in GREEK ~ no prob for me I was born near the Agean Sea ! Just where did you go wrong ? When you started or did it start when you ended ? That is the question ! Love is like that we have choices ~ BUT ~ if we go down the wrong path ~ that is the end and friendship dies ! Thanks for sharing ~ Please check my poems ~ BRIAN

  • Tony36

    Great and awesome write

  • Augustus

    Interesting because the Ninja can cleverly disguise their feelings so you don't know exactly where you stand.

  • SilentLaugh

    Augustus, your wording has actually inspired me. check my allpoetry website. My username is srutherford!

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