It's not about the punch
Or the fall to the floor
Or even about the pride
You don't feel anymore
It's all about the strength
In your hands and your feet
As you rise from the floor
And deny this defeat
It's not about the punch
Or the fall to the floor
Or even about the pride
You don't feel anymore
It's all about the strength
In your hands and your feet
As you rise from the floor
And deny this defeat
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THANKS PHR ~ Love the message in your first poem ~ short but very apt. In this life we are often "Knocked Down" but we only sicceed if we are never "Knocked Out" ! Thanks for sharing BRIAN
Thank you Brian....
Awesome write
Thank you tony. Made my day....
Welcome
Welcome to MPS! Great first poem. Loved your rhymes and your message. Thanks for sharing!
Thank you for you reply, I'm new to this... still learning....
Powerful Master Piece x
Thank you
Short & Impactive! Wonderful! Can't wait to read more from you.
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