Copyright ©2016 Stephanie R Schubert
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Hello lonely
I see you approaching
Hello lonely
Lifelike and encroaching
I tried to hold on with all I had
But then everything went from bad
To worse
I can rehearse
All of the words
All I know
is they are on their way
It’s was four months ago
As of yesterday
Another repeat
of what we always say we do
And nothing ever changes
At least not in my view
My life in the balance
Is the strangest feeling
I have ever had
Knowing what was good
Has now gone bad
Nothing left to move towards you
Nothing more than just few
Minutes to say
whatever we may
I look to you
Hello lonely
I knew it was you
Hello lonely
No one else will ever do
Hello Lonely
May we dance
This might be our last chance
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Author:
SSchubert (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 15th, 2016 12:33
- Category: Sad
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Comments4
WOW STEPH ~ This very elegant poem is bursting with PATHOS from the first line to the last ! Hope your last dance works out ~ Hugs ~ BRIAN
your poem has a pleasant rhyme and good flow and structure. write on ww.
Gave me chills!
Nicely done.
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