It was a dark winter day
In the land of nowhere.
It was foggy and vision was weary.
Many would enjoy this peacefulness of this sort
But this was all she has ever known
Her home was filled with loneliness
It was just not right
Shes had companions
But all that have been acquainted
Have been found as bare
As the dreary day that shall one day padd
She shall wait,
but will never know her true sunshine
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Author:
Jessica J. (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 15th, 2016 22:06
- Comment from author about the poem: This poem is supposed to show what many go through with friends and family. The winter represents how she feels lonely. Even though she has friends, all they care about is themselves and don't care about any ones feelings.
- Category: Surrealist
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Comments2
Sad. Well,written. Hugs.
WELCOME BRANDI ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ well written but bursting with PATHOS ! Winter is a melancholy Season and often the gloomy waether expresses how we feel inside ! Many oof us can empathise with the sentiments ! We all have friends but they are "Friends in Greed" but not "Friends in Need" when we ned them most. Thanks for caring. Yours BRIAN
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