Lights illuminate the world
Shining on so many faces
But is the path of dark not better
Falling running skipping swimming
Stuck in your imaginary worlds
Neglecting the real one around you
What is this green upon the ground
What is this blue up in the sky
Reality is nothing
They know not what death really is
For them when you die
You just regenerate.
By: Anna Starks
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Author:
Azura Nightsong (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 18th, 2016 14:32
- Comment from author about the poem: People are all trapped in their electronics, me included. It makes them blind.
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WELCOME ANNA ~ Thanks for a challenging first poem. I once remember in a PHYSICS class the teacher was showing slides of a RAINBOW when there was a REAL ONE outside hidden behind the window blinds ! Many YOUNG PEOPLE today (I'm 33) live in a virtual Worls and ignore (miss) the real World and real People all round them ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
thank you
Welcome to MPS! I know a person or two that are stuck in the "imaginary worlds" as you say. We all need to get out and experience the beautiful world we live in. Love the last stanza. Beautifully done. Thanks for sharing!
Awesome and well written
thanks
Welcome
!!!! I love the last line !!!!
thank you
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