A droplet splashes
On the desert sand- silence-
Water in the earth
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Author:
Elegant_Style (
Offline) - Published: November 18th, 2016 17:17
- Category: Nature
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- Users favorite of this poem: poetlife
A droplet splashes
On the desert sand- silence-
Water in the earth
Offline)
Comments4
Great write
thank you!!
Welcome
WELCOME ES ~ Thank you for a very elegant first poem ~ A perfect 5 7 5 Haiku and a perfect picture. Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
Welcome to MPS--Perfectly done Haiku with a wonderful picture to go with it. Thanks for sharing. Hope to see more!
What a crackling cracking imagery haiku. I find even deserts poetic. And u described swell. Kudos for the special effect in words.
U are most welcome to comment on my latest poem . Ive been writing for years and readers enjoyed and got Sth frm it so pleez do.
thank you!! I can't wait to read your poem
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