Haiku: Desert

Elegant_Style

A droplet splashes

On the desert sand- silence-

Water in the earth

  • Author: Elegant_Style (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 18th, 2016 17:17
  • Category: Nature
  • Views: 23
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Comments4

  • Tony36

    Great write

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    WELCOME ES ~ Thank you for a very elegant first poem ~ A perfect 5 7 5 Haiku and a perfect picture. Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)

  • Christina8

    Welcome to MPS--Perfectly done Haiku with a wonderful picture to go with it. Thanks for sharing. Hope to see more!

  • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

    What a crackling cracking imagery haiku. I find even deserts poetic. And u described swell. Kudos for the special effect in words.

    U are most welcome to comment on my latest poem . Ive been writing for years and readers enjoyed and got Sth frm it so pleez do.

    • Elegant_Style

      thank you!! I can't wait to read your poem



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