The Gods are laughing at me from up above,
Throwing stones at my back,
And dropping boulders on my path,
But when i look up to the sky all i see is a dove.
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Author:
Sora (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 22nd, 2016 12:42
- Comment from author about the poem: i think this might be my best poem
- Category: Reflection
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Comments7
interesting, i like it.
WELCOME DEAN ~ Thanks fro a challenging first poem ! What we see (in the spiritual dimension ) and what we feel are often different! ! BUT we need to keep looking up seeing th DOVES and avoiding the BOULDERS ! Thanks fro sharing ~ more please ~ Yours BRIAN
i'll be posting my poems as they come into my head this was the first one ive ever done
This is a beautiful first poem and it really makes you think.... it shows how there is darkness in beauty, sometimes
Welcome. Nice way to describe how you feel. I see the dove as a sign of hope. Well done.
thank you all when i wrote this i wasnt realy sure if it was good or not
Simple and beautiful x
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