The Gods in the sky

SorrowfullyHappy

The Gods are laughing at me from up above,

Throwing  stones at my back,

And dropping boulders on my path,

But when i look up to the sky all i see is a dove.

 

  • Author: Sora (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 22nd, 2016 12:42
  • Comment from author about the poem: i think this might be my best poem
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 52
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  • moontigerntn

    interesting, i like it.

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    WELCOME DEAN ~ Thanks fro a challenging first poem ! What we see (in the spiritual dimension ) and what we feel are often different! ! BUT we need to keep looking up seeing th DOVES and avoiding the BOULDERS ! Thanks fro sharing ~ more please ~ Yours BRIAN

  • SorrowfullyHappy

    i'll be posting my poems as they come into my head this was the first one ive ever done

  • Elegant_Style

    This is a beautiful first poem and it really makes you think.... it shows how there is darkness in beauty, sometimes

  • Augustus

    Welcome. Nice way to describe how you feel. I see the dove as a sign of hope. Well done.

  • SorrowfullyHappy

    thank you all when i wrote this i wasnt realy sure if it was good or not

  • niallprideaux

    Simple and beautiful x



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