I see the world,
I look at places, faces, empty spaces,
I stare at the pain, heavy chains, stealing brains,
Nothing explains, rejection, depression, infection,
Dark burdens that cut deep scars,
I ask why? How? Who does this?
I feel this cloud of heavy deadness,
I don't see this good,
I don't notice the freedom
I see lies, smaller size,
I notice her laugh fading, his arms hiding, people dying,
Cruelness comes from wellness,
Sadness comes from madness,
Dying comes from trying,
Where is the hope? Where's the love? Where is the good?
- Author: Miss_me ( Offline)
- Published: November 23rd, 2016 17:13
- Category: Sad
- Views: 38
Comments3
WELCOME MISS~ ME ! Thanks for a very well written but so so sad first poem. We do live in an almost defeated World ~ but as individuals we can rise above it ! MPS is a nice posiive site and there are lots of supportive people and supportive poetry. Thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN
Reflections on our world. That is true, we can rise above anything if we set our mind to it!
Most of my poems are sad, I will be posting them, and I might just start adding a positive spin on my poetry from now on. : )
Welcome to MPS. Awesome write
Awe, Thank you! : )
Welcome
Very good . Touched me deep keep writing
Thank you, I just write what I feel, Glad you could relate. : )
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