I want your love forever
That's why we keep coming together
But it seems like our love is pointless, it keeps changing like the weather
But we keep comin’ back stronger
Well we go back to the same place, conversations getting longer
We fight harder when we're with each other
But when we're away I can't feel your loving
I'm scared that one day you might move forward
Which makes me hold on to each word...
But every time you utter a response it's unsure
Cause I'm not positive that this true love is pure
Then it's not true love it's fake and a blur
Then what is these moments we have together?
Are the feelings a lie altogether...
The world will never know but I'm guessing that I must tell you, we’re breaking up and I think it’s for the better
Well before we say goodbye, the girl inside is glad you met her
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Poetic Justice (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This poem is dedicated to a dear friend...
- Category: Love
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WELCOME KIMBERLEY ~ THANKS FOR YOUR FIRST POEM ~ WHICH I ENJOYED ! Well structured and bursting with rhyme and rhythm ! BUT ~ I found the context a little sad. In my experience LOVE is a rocky road of ups & downs and Ins & outs. But on the whole I always say "Better to have loved and lost ~ than have never loved at all !" What we do gain is experience and resolve. This sentiment is beautifully echoed in your last line "Well before we say goodbye ~ the girl inside is glad you met her" hanks for caring ~ Yours BRIAN
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