GOOD LUCK ~ They say will come your way

If you carry a Four Leaf Clover

Or see a Black Cat or a Sweep in his Hat

Or wear your Purple Pullover !


A rabbit's foot or a bag of soot

Or wear a gold charm Pig

Or see a Bee or the number three

Or an Irishman dancin' a Jig !


When the moon is full ~ your can feel the pull

As its gravity brings you luck

After the rain ~ if the Rainbow's plain

Be sure your luck has struck !


So many things to bring us joy

Pink for Girl and Blue for a Boy

Is a OUIJA Board just a harmless toy ?

Can your good luck charm ~ cause you any harm ?


Your might think ~ I'm rather Odd

I don't trust to luck ~ but I trust in God

Every day I kneel and pray ~ God's Provison comes my way

I don't rub my rabbit's foot

I pray to GOD ~ no if ~ no but !


I always speak to GOD in PRAYER

'Cos he always hears and he's always there ?


Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~  BRIAN


Do you believe in LUCK or the POWER of PRAYER

or perhaps a bit of both ?   Love to all BRIAN 

  • Author: BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 25th, 2016 08:06
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  • WriteBeLight

    I believe in the power of prayer and believe we have guardian angels. I like this one very much.


      THANKS WBL ~ Daily prayer and the protection og God's appointed Guardian Angels ~ much better that luck and pure chance ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN

    • Tony36

      Great write

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        Thanks TONY ~ Prasie GOD we both kbow that Prayer changes things ~ Yours BRIAN

        • Tony36


        • Christina8

          First of all your rhyming poem was brilliant! I believe in the power of prayer. It's gotten us through a lot. And like WBL I think we have guardian angels too. Hugs in the spirit--Christina

          • BRIAN & ANGELA

            Thansk CHRIS ~ I knew your SPIRIT would resonate with my SPIRIT in the truths about PRAYER and from WBL about our Guardian Angels ~ AMEN Hugs in the Spirit ~ BRIAN

          • Silvertulip

            That was a wonderful poem. My favorite lines where "when the moon is full you can feel my pull, and can your good luck cause you harm" amazing writing thanks for sharing.

            • BRIAN & ANGELA

              Thanks for your comment SILVER ~ there is much food for thought in this poem ! Yours BRIAN

            • Elegant_Style

              I fully believe in the power of prayer... there is no luck, it is only God doing something extraordinary for us!!

              • BRIAN & ANGELA

                AMEN Sister ~ that makes good sense to me and even the RAINBOWS are created by the hand of GOD ~ AMEN Yours ~ BRIAN

              • puppylove17

                I love it Brian! I'd say i believe in a bit of both but mostly the power of prayer because God prevails through everything. Keep up the good work!

                • BRIAN & ANGELA

                  Thanks puppy pleased you loved it ! PRAYER is important and is the best "anxiety soother" I know of ! We all have a bit of "BLACK CAT" luck in our lives ~ which is OK provided we don't tell it too seriously ! Yours BRIAN

                • SharonMoemise

                  I notice the question mark at the end of your poem. I think everything I do and say also has that mark at the end, cos, I mean, do we really know? Your poem is what I'd call poetic truth. Beautifully written, wonderful rhythm and great writing skill portrayed. I enjoyed reading it over again.

                  • BRIAN & ANGELA

                    HI SHARON ~ Thanks for your lovely response. Prayer is all a question of FAITH ~ I believe and therefore it works for me ~ Poetic truth indeed. Praying every blessing in your life ~ HUGS ~ BRIAN

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