GOOD LUCK ~ They say will come your way
If you carry a Four Leaf Clover
Or see a Black Cat or a Sweep in his Hat
Or wear your Purple Pullover !
A rabbit's foot or a bag of soot
Or wear a gold charm Pig
Or see a Bee or the number three
Or an Irishman dancin' a Jig !
When the moon is full ~ your can feel the pull
As its gravity brings you luck
After the rain ~ if the Rainbow's plain
Be sure your luck has struck !
So many things to bring us joy
Pink for Girl and Blue for a Boy
Is a OUIJA Board just a harmless toy ?
Can your good luck charm ~ cause you any harm ?
Your might think ~ I'm rather Odd
I don't trust to luck ~ but I trust in God
Every day I kneel and pray ~ God's Provison comes my way
I don't rub my rabbit's foot
I pray to GOD ~ no if ~ no but !
I always speak to GOD in PRAYER
'Cos he always hears and he's always there ?
Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ BRIAN
Do you believe in LUCK or the POWER of PRAYER
or perhaps a bit of both ? Love to all BRIAN
-
Author:
BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 25th, 2016 08:06
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 96
- User favorite of this poem: Gothic_Girl.
Offline)
Comments7
I believe in the power of prayer and believe we have guardian angels. I like this one very much.
THANKS WBL ~ Daily prayer and the protection og God's appointed Guardian Angels ~ much better that luck and pure chance ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN
Great write
Thanks TONY ~ Prasie GOD we both kbow that Prayer changes things ~ Yours BRIAN
Welcome
First of all your rhyming poem was brilliant! I believe in the power of prayer. It's gotten us through a lot. And like WBL I think we have guardian angels too. Hugs in the spirit--Christina
Thansk CHRIS ~ I knew your SPIRIT would resonate with my SPIRIT in the truths about PRAYER and from WBL about our Guardian Angels ~ AMEN Hugs in the Spirit ~ BRIAN
That was a wonderful poem. My favorite lines where "when the moon is full you can feel my pull, and can your good luck cause you harm" amazing writing thanks for sharing.
Thanks for your comment SILVER ~ there is much food for thought in this poem ! Yours BRIAN
I fully believe in the power of prayer... there is no luck, it is only God doing something extraordinary for us!!
AMEN Sister ~ that makes good sense to me and even the RAINBOWS are created by the hand of GOD ~ AMEN Yours ~ BRIAN
I love it Brian! I'd say i believe in a bit of both but mostly the power of prayer because God prevails through everything. Keep up the good work!
Thanks puppy pleased you loved it ! PRAYER is important and is the best "anxiety soother" I know of ! We all have a bit of "BLACK CAT" luck in our lives ~ which is OK provided we don't tell it too seriously ! Yours BRIAN
I notice the question mark at the end of your poem. I think everything I do and say also has that mark at the end, cos, I mean, do we really know? Your poem is what I'd call poetic truth. Beautifully written, wonderful rhythm and great writing skill portrayed. I enjoyed reading it over again.
HI SHARON ~ Thanks for your lovely response. Prayer is all a question of FAITH ~ I believe and therefore it works for me ~ Poetic truth indeed. Praying every blessing in your life ~ HUGS ~ BRIAN
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.