Jason Vancelette (AKA Pharaoh33)


I need water
To cleanse my body
Illuminate my spirit
To nurture my soul

H2O is simple but very profound
Because of it life on Earth abounds
Water in its liquid form carries sap to trees
And BLOOD for energy for Humans Birds & Bees
Liquid water good for swim & for boats is nice
But it's beaUty is revealed when it turns to ICE
Every snowflake different ~ spiky hexagons
See them under microscope ~ beauty linger on !
Snow protects the sleeping soil ready for next Spring
In the deep mid-Winter hear the Children sing
Never waste the water God provides so free
In wells and reservoirs and lakes there for you and me
VENUS & MARS are our neighbours in SPACE
But they aint got no water ~ to live there aint no place
This poem is a rhyming 6 - 6 - 2 sonnet ~ ENJOY !

Proverbs 25:25
“Like cold water to a thirsty soul, so is good news from a far country.”

Water is tasty
and taste is tasty
water is cold
and cold must be water.

Water the bread of life
The cornerstone by which the human body lives


  • kevin browne

    I feel the intensity of this poem flowing through my veins and that excites me greatly. keep your fingers dipped firmly in the water of positivity where the river always flows and it will take you to wherever you want to go. I have fallen in love with this 'water' poem.

    • Jason Vancelette (AKA Pharaoh33)

      Thank you, Kevin and all of you who have participated on this piece...it started with a simple thought I had and turned into a beautiful piece

    • P.X. Vexxus

      I was a little late. I've been too busy with work to write lately:
      The brilliant shining liquid shimmers beneath glowing rays of light
      Flowing softly in a steady stream of glistening delight
      Whispering as it trickles over smooth stones with an infinite vigor
      The water of life forever paints a feeling of serenity with a frozen shiver

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