elsiewarrenswords

Leaves of depression

The days rustled past,


Like the leaves over my feet


As I walked to the doctors.
“You have anxiety mixed with
Signs of depression”
I had visions. He did it! I wanted to scream when he said it.


He left me!


He deserted me when it was what he promised he wouldn’t do!


But there I was sat on that doctors chair in silence


Listening to the printing


Of my prescribed sleeping tablets.

Comments4

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    WELCOME ELSIE ~ Thank you for a very well penned but very very sad first poem. Your are very brave to share and I trust you found it cathartic ! A lovely LADY like you should never ever be deserted ! Thinking of you I hope the sleeping tablets help ~ Hugs ~ BRIAN

    • elsiewarrenswords

      Thank you so very much - that's very kind of you! I find it's a fine way to atleast alleviate some pain and hurt by writing.
      Have a lovely day!

    • Kidwxnder

      this is amazing i feel as if we should collaborate

      • elsiewarrenswords

        Nice one thank you very much! Hit me up anytime and when I'm free we can discuss?

        • Kidwxnder

          Deal

        • Christina8

          Welcome to MPS. A great first poem. I find it helps the poet as well as those reading the poem. I have anxiety too. Thanks for sharing Hope you get some sleep!

          • elsiewarrenswords

            I'm suprised by how amazing people are on here - so kind and supportive. It really does - thank you!

          • Gothic_Girl

            amazing good job i just hope you feel better



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