Front row heat,
Bobbing heads, geeked,
I don't need a seat,
I don't need to eat,
I, I can't see.
Floating like the beat.
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princess_inventor (
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- Comment from author about the poem: The city making pretty girls feel hollow.
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WELCOME PRINCESS ~ Thank you fro a challenging first poem ! In my experience (as a young single man) ~ The City does tend to overwhelm Attractive Young Ladies scoop them into its maelstrom and thereby leave them feeling somewhat hollow as you say ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
Welcome to MPS. Great write
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