lost in a forest
by kat
so many crowds of people,
like i am lost in a forest
trying to get out,
which way should i go left or right
what should i do, should i stay or go forward
all i see is trees everywhere
everywhere i see,
so lost i feel like i am getting deeper in the forest
(found this poem i wrote in 2013)
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Author:
Kitkat231997 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: i found an old poem i wrote in 2013 hope u like
- Category: Gothic
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i remember getting an A- on this my teacher said this took me out of my element but i just had a mask on showing a smile but deep down hurt and in pain
A mask huh....interesting. Nice poem.
WONDERFUL KAT ~ Thanks for sharing ~ your teacher was right to give you an "A" because it encouraged you as a POET ! What I like is there is no ending so each of us have to find our own way out of the forest ! Hugs ~ BRIAN
This could apply to any situation. So, everyone can relate in their own way relative to a place in which they feel that cannot escape. I like it very much.
Great write.
i am going to post another poem i wrote in 2013
thanks for the support
everyone
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