Locked up in a room
made up of my sorrows,
I sat and I waited
for each possible tomorrow.
Alone with my thoughts,
and alone with my feelings,
I sat and I waited
and my mind was always screaming.
With nowhere to go,
and nothing to do at all,
I fantasized about my life
outside of those four walls.
I waited for the day
of my glorious release,
and until that day,
I sent my captors constant, aching pleas.
I begged and I pried
to finally be free,
but no one seemed to listen,
and no one seemed to hear me.
For I knew not how long
my captivity would be,
because I never realized
that my captor was me.
- Author: Christina K ( Offline)
- Published: November 28th, 2016 14:20
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments8
Excellent! What I take from this is we are all our own worst enemy sometimes.👍👍
Thanks, so true
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A wonderful poem CHRISTINA with and unexpected sting in the TAIL ! When ever I discuss (with my friends) about escaping abroad to somewhere civilised like SWEDEN ~ They always remind that the first person I will meet when I get off the plane is ME. Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
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Wonderful poem! Sometimes we don't realize what we do to ourselves. Thanks for sharing!
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Awesome write. Sometimes we get so busy in this world, we fail to see the damage that is caused upon ourselves
Thanks, very true
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Oh my God! That was amazing.
Thanks for sharing~silver
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Really well written, something I can relate with as well as many others. : )
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Wow! This poem was wonderful and portrayed a brilliant message!
Thanks a lot!
This is truly potent; what an amazing way to portray how our own inhibitions, doubts and fears can hold us back and build the sturdiest of prisons around us. Very well written 😀 xx
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