Ocean of depression

teganml90210

The ocean tries to rest,
But in comes a storm,
The deep blue tried it's best,
To beautifully reform.

The darkness takes over,
The sadness arises,
The sea of anxiety looks for closure,
A ray of sunshine would surprise us.

But down comes the rain,
To full the ocean some more,
Every drop realeases some pain,
The drowning is something I cannot ignore.

I lay on that pillow to rest my head,
But the tears fills my eyes instead,
The years get harder too control,
Beating depression is my goal.

  • Author: teganml90210 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 28th, 2016 16:53
  • Comment from author about the poem: This poem relates to what I'm going through, thank you for reading.
  • Category: Sad
  • Views: 193
  • Users favorite of this poem: Christina8
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  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    WELCOME TEGAN ~ Thanks for sharing your first poem ~ which is painful one ! I trust you found it cathartic ! MPS is a very empathetic site and we will share your pain with you. Depression is beatable but you need understanding and support. We care ~ thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN

    • teganml90210

      Thank you so much 🙂

      • teganml90210

        Thank you so much 🙂

      • Tony36

        Welcome MPS, GREAT WRITE

        • teganml90210

          Thank you 😊

          • Tony36

            Welcome

          • poetboy123

            This was really good! I wish you the best of luck to get through whatever block you are having in life!

          • Christina8

            Welcome to MPS! You wrote a beautiful poem, absolutely beautiful. Although it is sad, it helps others that are depressed read it. Hope you've found an outlet. Thanks for sharing!



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