you left us that day
on November twenty-eighth
you were really sick
you were only on by a thread
you'll never see me graduate
or even get married
you'll never see you grand kids
you'll never see them grow
when you died that day
it was like a stab in the heart
you died so fast
I could not cope
I don't know what to do
without you by my side
you were my hero
the one I'd confide in
I just have this numb feeling
deep inside of me
that won't go away
no matter how much I try
I didn't want to accept the fact
that you were really gone
I mean you were my dad
that one I'd rely on
you weren't just my dad
but also my best friend
I told you everything
no matter how bad it was
I sometimes wonder
why you had to go
and why you couldn't stay
holding me just a little bit longer
I'd give anything
to just have one more day
with your arms wrapped around me
telling me everything will be okay
I can't believe
how long you've been gone
it'll be going on six years
since you left the world behind
I miss you daddy
each and every day
what I wouldn't give
to see your smiling face
I know now
that your not coming back
your truly gone
but I'll soon see you again
I will stay strong
I won't give up
I may not see you now
but your always in my heart
no matter what happens
you'll always be my daddy
I'll love and miss you
each and every day yet to come
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berdnt_victoria (
Offline) - Published: November 30th, 2016 11:53
- Category: Sad
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Comments4
Lovely poem. I'm so sorry for what you've been through. I'm sure your dad would have loved this poem.
Thank you. It helps when I write poems to get rid of emotion.
That's the same reason i found this site. I hope you feel better
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WELCOME VICTORIA ~ Thanks for your first poem. Beautifully written but a sad sad subject. You only have one DAD and as you say "When he's gone ~ he's gone ! " Six years is a long time ~ BUT ~ it doesn't get easier ~ I lost a BROTHER about five years ago but it was like yesterday. The BIBLE TEACHES that we will meet our loved ones again in Heaven and I'm glad you have that hope. Your challenge now it to take care and grow up toi be the :LADY your Daddy would have wanted you to be ~ AMEN. Thinking of you ~ praying for you ~ Yours BRIAN
Thank you so much! I'm getting better but it still hard! I just miss him so much but I do know he'll always be in my heart! Thank you for your prayers!
Welcome to MPS. Great write
Welcome to MPS. I'm so sorry for your loss. Your poem is beautiful and I'm sure he would have loved it.
Thank you so much! I sure hope so!
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